
Efficacy of Instructor Feedback on Written Work in an Online Program
Article
Thomas Wolsey, Walden University, United States
International Journal on E-Learning, ISSN 1537-2456 Publisher: Association for the Advancement of Computing in Education (AACE), Waynesville, NC USA
Abstract
The author details a study of the feedback provided in four online courses and how adult students perceived and made use of that feedback. The relation of feedback to formative assessment is briefly considered. Students indicated a preference for feedback embedded in the document rather than summarized at the end of their work. Categories for types of feedback are established. A discussion of instructor presence as it relates to online courses and student written work submissions outside of threaded discussions is central to the findings in this study.
Citation
Wolsey, T. (2008). Efficacy of Instructor Feedback on Written Work in an Online Program. International Journal on E-Learning, 7(2), 311-329. Waynesville, NC USA: Association for the Advancement of Computing in Education (AACE). Retrieved March 21, 2023 from https://www.learntechlib.org/primary/p/23564/.
© 2008 Association for the Advancement of Computing in Education (AACE)
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